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This does have a vocal melody but it's not completed so I just wanted some feedback on weather is should stay as a poem or if I should make it a song

Running, screaming through the rain Hopin’ for another sunny day Wishin on a star and askin for a chance Holdin onto something that..

I've got papers piling up I’m losing my mind Just tryna make a deadline I got places to go I got people to see Who are workin' h..

Who said it’s wrong to close your eyes? Who said it’s wrong to listen to the lies? Who said it’s wrong to ignore who you are, ..

I’ve been standin’ on the corner I’ve been I’ve been I’ve been hopin’ for another Lit path, I won&rsq..

(spoken: go ahead. Call me crazy. Call me pathetic. Tell me I’m over reacting. Act like you care. Go on. Gimme your best shot) Hit me, hurt ..

I’m running out of time and I’m holding onto life cause I’m barely Breathing Now I’m crying out The ceil..

I’m full of heartache and revenge Throwing crosses to the wind Firing bullets in the sky Let’s see who makes it out alive ..

My eyes are getting heavier I can’t sleep anymore I’ve got heartache up to the ceiling Insecurity knockin on my door Is th..

A beautiful day Under the sun’s rays Down by the tracks Hearing the whistle blow Watching the steam flow Into the sky (Quiet t..