Bahh! Thanks so much, I would love to hear your thoughts and critique on it ^^. I'm trying out that writing style, and that is definitely one of my ideas for a book (I can draw some loose comparisons between the story and RL, though I definitely don't consider myself to be a prodigy, I do think there must be some intense dissapointment on my Mother's side, and some of the things she does will be translated in the things "Veronica" (what do you think of that name) does *shrug*)
I cannot wait to see anything you post, of course, as I love your writing as well :D ^^