When I was mid high school I didn't like my writing others didn't and many where very critique of it but there was many that loved it and were supportive of it and so was I it will get easier
I was about your age when I finished High school and I was very critique of myself when I was younger I am not as much but I know my gift to write is from God and you will get better the older you get but you have very nicely penned work but it changes some as we grow in wisdom :) it has for me but I did some good writes when I was younger it is just a Phase I feel but when someone is Inspired or it helps them in a hard time it makes me want to write when I get published or any of my work does I will be doing it for God and others to help them I want it to reach out to young and old help them and show one's what real love is and help some get closer to Jesus. I write whatever god Inspires me to write. Blessings. Kindred poet