* Mourning Sun * ( Son Of * Mourning Starr * )

Hello My name is John , I am 13 years old and I am the son of * Mourning Starr *....I live I Wildwood, New Jersey with my family, I attend the 6th grade at our local Catholic Elementary School..........I am just starting out as a writer/poet and am very inexperienced...I would very much like to get some constructive criticism on my work and how I can improve it.......Thanks so much