Try..Try Again!

 

 

King Bruce's story has been heard by many,

But is actually followed by a few scanty,

'Try, try Again Until You Succeed' has lost its importance,

Over the years it has been long forgotten!

 

Why do we let despair take over us,

Why do we leave our goals unreached,

Why do we every moment die,

Is it just because we are afraid of trying!

 

None of us is a failure for we all are unique,

Though someone is made a pauper and another a queen,

The world at large ia a drama,

Being directed by the divine power,

Then why do we not rehearse our shots again and again,

So that the film at the end is nothing but perfect!

 

Try, Try Again Until You Succeed was true for the past,

Is true for the present,

And will remain always true for the future!

 

 

Author's Note

Though its not such a good write but i liked the meassage it gives so i put it up!

Reviews

[Dev]

" Why do we let despair take over us,
Why do we leave our goals unreached,
Why do we every moment die,
Is it just because we are afraid of trying!" My fav lines :)

[Shalini Dinesh]

most of the time we never try fearing failure, and yeah we need to break the shell of fear and come out to see the sun shine never minding the darkness, every night is a hope that there will be bright sunshine the next morning....
nice message... poem needs a little more fine tuning ....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct. We must keep going forward and reaching for goals and dreams. I like the story. It is positive and hopeful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[MissWordSmith]

None of us is a failure for we all are unique,

Though someone is made a pauper and another a queen,

Nice words! It wasn't a bad write! what r u talking about?!
It was actually really good....

remember...Try and Try Till You Succeed! :) :)

[harman kour]

nice message! i liked d 2nd stanza... ".......V r afraid of trying"