Just a feeling

i  see a star that dropped from heavens above
sat in divine blue with angelic glory
on floor that’s so mundane but is made special by her touch

 

This cute girl with her wondrous visage resurects dead poets to life
hairlocks around her face like sunbathed flower is a blood veins of poet
her every glance a poem and her wink of eye is the song

 

She is shapely and beautiful to an onlooker
but for a poet she is a melody sweetly played in tune
and a wondrous art carefully drawn on canvas

 

Her dress in blue drives any one to blues
she sat cross legged puts the poet fingures crossed
and her gorgeous looks; Oh My God! are the waves electric

 

These few lines I sketched in hurrry
in my first glance at this loveliest figure
words conceieved at heart and delivered in ink.

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

some women have such an effect that we truly are helpless in their gaze

[?]

I like this...loved the flow..discriptions and imagery were great