Autumn Night

Collapse upon this autumn night

In a collaboration of binding love

That imitate the silver stars

Cohabitating amongst the orange

And vibrant crimson reds

 

Grab a hold of this moment

Collaborating unique expressions

Of deep amethysts admiration  

That dances with feathery touches

 

Fingertips migrate southward

With graceful liquid intent

Sensations suspended

Hovering in the sounds

Soft lingering in urgency

 

Golden leaves blanket

Velvety expose skin

As only mother nature can

When intimate notations

Are drawn upon the midnight clouds

 

Breathe the silent pleas

Of electrifying excitement

When the surge of passion

Courses through engorged veins

Painting autumn colors

Across exquisite flesh

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

First I am hypnotized by the captivating image, and then by the words you used to paint us all a picture. I especially find the following lines very enticing...
"Fingertips migrate southward
With graceful liquid intent
Sensations suspended
Hovering in the sounds
Soft lingering in urgency"
Well written.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I wrote this in the fall and autumn can be quite a romantic season even though most think of spring and summer as that. I am glad you liked those lines. I try to make it sensual without over doing it.

[Deneru Yamada]

incredible. Keep up the good work! :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you

[Tina Kline]

Impressive! A very beautiful and vibrant poem of romance!!! A delight to read. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you liked it. I love romance.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

OMG! You always move my sensation , with every word you wrote , you are talented :) keep it up

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I want the reader to feel the sensations the narrator in the piece is feeling.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah i did :)

[Poetic Beauty]

:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh such gorgeous wording with a touch of sensuality... that is what autumn is all about and why it is my favorite season.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Autumn Nights can be quite amazing.

[Seanh12]

Amazing and beautiful, love the detail. Autumn is beautiful season i love it. Well done

[Poetic Beauty]

I find autumn is a season of passion and real love wrapped in stunning colors and tantalizing smells.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and beautiful description in the poem. Autumn is a time of mystery. Earth is dying and the change of color leave us in wonder.
"Grab a hold of this moment
Collaborating unique expressions
Of deep amethysts admiration
That dances with feathery touches"
Thank you my Poet friend for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

I believe autumn is the season of real love. Love changes over time like the changing of the leaves and adding of warmer spices creating a passion that evolves but still as strong.

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too. People seem to slow down. Desire some warmth for the cold of Winter coming.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautifully erotic with the soft touch of the season :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I think with the spices of fall and the color changes autumn should be the season of love.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

I personally find it to be my favorite season

[Poetic Beauty]

I love all the seasons except winter.