I'm in Love

A poem

I wish you were here

you're so far yet so close

I miss you so much

You know that I love you most

 

If anyone hurts you,

verbal pushes and shoves

you better believe

I'm not afraid to put up the gloves

 

Knowing you're there

and that you love me so much

a tear comes to my eye

it's my heart that you touch

 

These emotions, confusing.

These tears, so rare.

These screams, the truth.

Everyone else? Unaware.

 

Sometimes I become doubtful,

moments when my fears creep

you reassure me.

My faith, I will always keep.

 

When it seems that no one is there,

that every one hates me to death,

he turns me around and says

I'll love everything you do, every breath.

 

So what I'm trying to say,

though it's not hard to do,

is tell you what I believe.

Say I LOVE YOU <3

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I like the fourth stanza the best.
"These emotions, confusing" - I think that this line perfectly explains the complexity of love.
I like your poem. It deals with the common theme of love, but yours is kinda different than all those other poems. Good job.

[ApDunamis]

this is really sweet. great poem!

[Simmirose]

I like this poem, and i don't really go for love poems but yours wasn't like the other ones i have read. Nice flow and you made me feeel everything you were writing great Job!

[Admiral Kirk]

Reviewing so many of your poems, I'm running out of words for awesome. So I'll just say awesome. I love the pictures at the beginning and end, they are so true and the poem between is so beautiful. The feelings conveyed in this poem are just right for the situation, and every word in every stanza is so well thought-out, I couldn't help but smile while I read this. This is quite a wonderful poem.

[Morrigan Nicole]

I know how you feel absolutely!!! I just so happen to be in love with the most amazing, absolutely perfect man! Although he is 25 and me 16! I've known him for years, he's my brothers best friend and has always been part of the family. He calls my mother mom and a nicer man you could not find anywhere. I swear on my life that I will marry him some day!!!! We are truer than true!!! He is my first guy ever, and I promise he will be my last! Till death do us part!!!! I love him so much, and this poem of yours completely covered my feelings for him!!! Definitely going to be a favorite of mine!!!

[melandra]

this is a heartfelt poem

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is the best days of a life. I like the flow of thoughts and the desire of love in the words. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tai Ryens]

I love the fourth stanza. You delivered this nicely, using a topic that is possibly overused, but adding a sprinkle of your own emotions onto it. Well done.

[JadeForever]

Looooved this...you retold the story of my life. your in my head!!! I agreed that I looked the fourth and first stanza the best. I enjoyed the pics. They were cute. Nice Poem. I like your style

[Krista Weiss]

Really cute! Absolutely loved it

[S. Michael Long]

This is sweet, and yet doesn't go overboard on expecting the reader to feel the same emotion.. i like that about this poem (: very well done, i also agree with Tomislav.. i love the 4th. (: -s