Forbidden Love

I have put you through so much

I have pushed you to the ground

Each time you try to get back up

I always seem to come around

 

But why, why should I care

Why don’t I just leave you be

Rather than making you bear

The sorrow that fills the sea 

 

I don’t understand it

Or maybe I do

It’s forbidden love

Its me and you

Reviews

[Arte Por Vida]

Forbidden love is a great thing to write about. Nice job--I like it!

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, thank you. (:

[Allycat]

Marvelous
I really liked reading this one, it reminds me of a certain someone I know and the boy she loves
well done!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you! Glad you could connect it to your own life! (:

[Mind Giant]

Excellent read. Thanks for sharing this with us. I believe that most of us have been there at one point of another in our life. there is something about what we can look but not touch , touch but not taste, taste but not swallow. Its refreshing at times to read a piece that is short but very powerful.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. I agree, it's a natural desire to have what is not ours to claim. It's like a kid who all his life was offered veggies and was never allowed to have candy. He plans a plot, a scheme. He takes a bite and decides he likes it better.....BUT, that's not to say it's better for him. Such is true with love and relationships. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! (:

[B-poet]

That attraction for forbidden love is contagious as coveting someone else's significant other. It's wrong but it feels so right. Acting on those emotion's can lead to a dead end but people travel down this street very often. Great write. :)

[That1Nerd23]

Yes, for sure. I agree completely. Thank you. (:

[Isobella Rose]

Very good

[That1Nerd23]

Thank. (:

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Gud stuff...

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. (:

[Wakeofahero]

Nicely done, love it!

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you so much! (:

[Anna]

"A forbidden Love is better than none at all."
just something it made me think of.. great poem Jess (:

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you, Anna dear! (:

[J. Viands]

Good stuff sad but good

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. (:

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

I really like this. And the flow is nice and smooth.

[That1Nerd23]

Thank you. (: