Flower Girl

A new nursery rhyme, resembling those of the 18th Century.

Flower Girl

 

Flower girl, flower girl,

Eyes bright, and cheeks rosy,

Flower girl, flower girl,

Sell me a posy.

 

Flower girl, flower girl,

Hair of brown, and eyes blue,

Flower girl, flower girl,

I’ll even buy two!

Author's Note

Initial reactions and constructive criticism appreciated. This is meant to resemble a traditional, 18th Century nursery rhyme.

Reviews

[sette]

i like the rhyming of the words and the simplicity of the poem in terms of words and content.

[Debbie Barry]

Thank you, Sette! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it!

[Glen Weimann]

Again, right on the money, Debbie. Feels very like ones that might have been around possibly even as late as the early 20th century (A A Milne 'When we were very young' has poems very similar to this). Nice work!

[Debbie Barry]

Thank you, Nigel! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it, and that it had the right feel for you! I'm working on a second little volume of original nursery rhymes, including these.

[M.E.Lyle]

Mission accomplished. It does remind me of Ring Around The Rosie.

[Debbie Barry]

Thank you, M.E.! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it, and that you found it to have the desired sense.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words dear Debbie. The words danced to perfection tale. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Debbie Barry]

Thnk you, Coyote! I'm truly pleased that you enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy Debbie and you are welcome.