Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe? Love is the only trait that is worth remembering because it is meant to be given away selflessly. The recipient is as happy to receive it as you were to give it!
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If all your neutrons were connected together and engaged at the same time they would be able to create a thought sequence far greater than the size of any universe known to humankind. Your deep thinking mind has stirred the pot and may well bring many others into action and this in itself may start a chain reaction.
Your poetry is a catalyst for other poets and I am always interested in what you have to say
Leigh
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Leigh I am extremely humbled by your thoughts. Thank you so much I hope you have a great Christmas
Long time no see, but it is the same ole me ... You have penned a very touching piece of philosophical thought that serves as hope for a future for all the Human Race... Time will tell out the story plays out, but we can only hope for the best, for whatever intangible essence Love is comprised, constructed, or formulated of implicitly inexplicable, unfathomable, and surely incomprehensible realm that resides not in the Cranial Brain, but within that Brain of the Smart Heart, for it is now Scientifically established that the Human Heart, indeed, possesses a small brain that deals explicitly in feelings and instincts, for Love and for Survival ... Sadly, it is that Cranial Brain, starved by distance from that oxygen pumping heart, that learns to hate, know hatred, and practices hate in wreaking havoc upon Mankind ... Excellently written, my friend, as usual ...
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you, sure. Love has a quality unique to itself. It is selfless. It cannot be extorted such as .. read moreThank you, sure. Love has a quality unique to itself. It is selfless. It cannot be extorted such as in religion where God tells you that you must love him or pay the price. Love Has to be given freely. Or it has no meaning. It can’t be extorted it can’t be bought. It is the one uniquely precious thing that human beings are responsible for. The reason love can wreak havoc and cause pain and such great measure is because it is so precious. It leaves us exposed. I must give of them self in the hope that it will be turned against them. it is the sharing of the heart with another that puts a person out there.
1 Year Ago
Hi, sorry some of that came out wrong but you’ll understand my phone doesn’t copy my voice compl.. read moreHi, sorry some of that came out wrong but you’ll understand my phone doesn’t copy my voice completely
I like the poem speaking about the true value of things in life. It's not about the accomplishments that one has, but the people that a person has touched. That is remembered in this time and also the next I believe.
Hi Tate,
Not sure why your words made me cry but probably the reason is that we are just dust in the wind and unless we take life as an adventure and pursue our hopes and dreams and always look and hopefully find love then we are nothing.....
I loved every word of your poem.
lisa, loving our adventure in Spain
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Well Lisa if tears flow in the reading I will smile for having touched your heart. Thank you enjoy S.. read moreWell Lisa if tears flow in the reading I will smile for having touched your heart. Thank you enjoy Spain
Thank you for giving this beautiful poem an airing Tate. I was delighted to read it. What a beautiful photograph of Lucy. The love we have for our children and grandchildren certainly touches the summit. Keep well and happy. You have a real talent with words.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Thanks Chris the days are measured By our children as we watch them grow up we realize we are gettin.. read moreThanks Chris the days are measured By our children as we watch them grow up we realize we are getting old
What a stunning message
i really miss all your work
so humane and alive
speaking from a place filled with wisdom and life
you are a wonderful poet .... thank you for writting this
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Solo thank you I am honored. It is easy to create works for those who inspire us all. Bernie is one .. read moreSolo thank you I am honored. It is easy to create works for those who inspire us all. Bernie is one such individual Just simply Beyond.
This little blue planet of life....indeed. Heartfelt poetry Tate. Well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Hi Tl Boehm nice to see you today Always a surprise to have you stop by May this be a great day for .. read moreHi Tl Boehm nice to see you today Always a surprise to have you stop by May this be a great day for you .
Love is never to be measured or calculated, it is just to be given and received without motive. Magnificence is unmeasurable! You pen it often, Thank You..Barbz
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you Barb Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe? Love is the only trait that is wo.. read moreThank you Barb Can a thought or feeling be larger than a universe? Love is the only trait that is worth remembering because it is meant to be given away selflessly. The recipient is as happy to receive it as you were to give it!
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