Dear Lord, this was so beautiful I swear it touched my soul. Every line is like a burst of overwhelming beauty the not only encourages but pushes and tugs at the reader to read on and crave more. Honestly, I was breathless by the end of it, my eyes were absorbed by each word as was the rest of being, reading this was an experience I wouldn't mind having a few hundred times more. Thank you for sharing.
-Cathrine
'Memory
Tate Morgan,
'I need so few of this world's goods'; It does not compare with the inner heart place where past treasures are kept. This a beautiful rendition of how we begin to realize what really matters. As minutes fly and we grow older by the day....coins of gold .......loose significance. Thank you for the reminder that this life is not about stuff but about love!
Blessings dear writer.
Kathy
Our children truly are the most precious of gifts. This poem is a lovely tribute on what kids can teach us. Tears flow as I read this one (although I must admit I am a bit emotional this week as our youngest will marry on Saturday). Your words are always beautiful laid out and easily paint pictures in my mind!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Karen thank you. in moments like these we truly realize why we are here and for who and what we have.. read moreKaren thank you. in moments like these we truly realize why we are here and for who and what we have bled. I prayed at the time that I could be gracious and smile when the day drew near then wish her well as Time would tell if I could overcome my fear. I wish for you the same peace.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Tate. I pray it is so, and I can show half the grace you do in both your poems and your w.. read moreThank you, Tate. I pray it is so, and I can show half the grace you do in both your poems and your words :)
This piece is so beautiful, it moved me to tears while I was reading it. It has an elegance to it. Not only that, but I like how your writing style has a beautiful fanciness to it. This piece of writing has the beauty and elegance of lace.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Joanna it is nice to hear from you today. I do believe not only that it is important to wr.. read moreThank you Joanna it is nice to hear from you today. I do believe not only that it is important to write beautiful things but to present them as such as well.
this poem pierces my heart thru and thru ... in such a marvelous and miraculous way .. your language, sound, and rhythm move me ... and those pictures ... i rejoice with you and your daughter Aris!! what a beautiful bride ... God bless you all :))
so fine!
E.
ps such a great pic of you two ... :))
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you I have had a tumultuous couple weeks I was honored to walk my little girl down the aisle f.. read moreThank you I have had a tumultuous couple weeks I was honored to walk my little girl down the aisle followed by yesterday. My father Eddies memorial held on fathers day 6/21/15
Time has a way of wearing us down. The old recriminations seem to ring out hollow as we ourselves become polished by the winds of time. In that end we see that love shines bright upon the simple truths of life. We find that one thing that makes life so worth the pain, that of unconditional love of another that both grants us the strength and grace to struggle on. My fathers ashes were symbolically poured across the finish line of the race track where his life started and his race was finally done. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/aristate/1323374/
It's so easy for people to get caught up in the pursuit of material wealth and loose sight of the true wealth of human experience. You beautifully call the mind back to what our only real treasures should and can ever be.
NOTES:
"…this [world's] goods"
"…plant [love's] garden…"
"My treasure [lays]…"
Thank you dear I will agree on two of your three corrections However on lays i shall have to disagre.. read moreThank you dear I will agree on two of your three corrections However on lays i shall have to disagree it is intentionally( lay)
Tate... You have the wonderful habit of creating polished gems of heart wisdom. I feel the same way about my daughter and your words made me appreciate the fact of her priceless existence even more... Great job as usual!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you J.K. We are sop lucky arent we to have such children
Tate, my friend this is amazing writing. I was hanging on every word, wonderful piece of love and
gratitude for your kids,thanks for sharing and b-blessed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you friend.it has always been my assumption that children are the jewels ion our crowns of lif.. read moreThank you friend.it has always been my assumption that children are the jewels ion our crowns of life
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