A Pirates Spyglass

glancing through that spyglass didn't scare me away like you wished it would it made me cling to you in fear that i was going to loose you permanently

Onward into the sea of desperation and heartache

I set sail and you command the wind to push me farther away

in hope that I won't see the island of darkness that you reside at

but only if you knew that I had a pirates rusty spyglass

that I found in the bottom of my little fishing boat

glancing through that spyglass didn't scare me away like you wished it would

it made me cling to you in fear that I was going to lose you permanently

I realized what my parents were going through with me

collapsed into my bedroom refusing to participate in life for 6 months straight

I don't want that for you

even if you have already been there at some point in the past

as hard as that chilly storm is blowing my way 

I will fight on through the bitterness and suffering of both of us

just to make sure that you are a permanent fixture in my life

at some point though

 I hope the rain and bitter air will stop and you will feel close to me again

for if it goes on like this for much longer 

my boat will capsize and I will drown.

Reviews

[M. George]

I think this is a powerful poem full of vivid imagery and metaphor - nice work here. Just be careful about your spelling and punctuation, e.g. in "i was going to loose you" it should be "lose", not "loose". :)